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Re: [HOE] Biodome



 >Now my point is this.  Authors of adventures MUST think of a better way to
 >advance the plot than beating a posse up until they surrender.  This HAS to
 >be the cheapest trick in the arsenal.

(snip)
 >Any thoughts on this one?

The problem here is that this is a standard convention in most adventure 
stories - the capture and struggle for freedom bit.

The problem is that the author has a lot more control over the setting than 
a marshal does.
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O'Brien:
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