Re: [DL] The juices are flowing...

["Leybourne, Brian" <Brian.Leybourne@airnz.co.nz>]

> 2.  Maybe this is a knee-jerk reaction, but the finale
> seems too contrived.  I know you did this off the cuff, but
> you would need to weave the clues between the past and
> present to make them a bit more subtle.  Having seen some
> of your previous ideas, this shouldn't be a problem...

Yeah, I know it needs work.. it was made up as I went along :-)

> 3. Since you're open to the HoE/DL crossover, I'd introduce
> a bit of the wrong posse in the wrong time a bit...

Not sure what you mean, Nick. Do you mean DL posse in HOE and HOE posse in
Deadlands? Now *that* could be interesting.

Brian "Always liked the idea of Templars in Deadlands" Leybourne.

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