Re: [HOE] Yet another Unity review... (Shane) (now with an added solution)

["Kai Tave" <kaitave@harborside.com>]

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>Thanks Kai Tave, you just got my brain pumping. I'm going to flesh this
idea out
>more later but here are the basic rewrites. (Forgive poor wording and the
>sketchiness, it's late)


(Snip)

That's not a bad way of doing things, actually.  It eliminates the chance to
play "20 Questions", but it puts responsibility on the posse (as well as the
spotlight), which is a good thing.

One idea I had was for Hellstrome to be working with the surviving member of
the Unforgotten Fifteen (if we may pretend for a moment that there actually
was one).  He or she could help convince party members that Hellstrome
speaks the truth, could act as a guide in getting the posse aboard the Unity
itself, could back posses up in combat, and could even be bait for the
"engine" if you wanted to cut posses a break.

--Kai Tave